Ribbons of Thought

June 12, 2011
By SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends


The ribbons of thought,
Twining into ideas,
Now become actions.


The author's comments:
I got this poem from the thought of how thoughts twist like ribbons and then braid into ideas, and ideas become actions.

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on Aug. 6 2011 at 12:08 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Thanks!                 

on Aug. 5 2011 at 9:54 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

I love how you convey such a deep emotion within three sentences of a haiku. AMAZING :)

on Aug. 5 2011 at 1:45 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Thank you!

Fayrouz SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:03 pm
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
9 articles 12 photos 364 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

very unique three lines, it's very complex yet simple and stated so profoundly. keep writing :)

on Jul. 27 2011 at 6:28 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Thankie kindly!

Peacock said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:47 pm
Peacock, St. George, South Carolina
0 articles 10 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
And remember, no matter where you go, there you are.
-Confucius

Me likes... <3

Complex without seeming so, because of how it all ties together so simply!


on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:09 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Thank you!   Please check out my other stuff too!

on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:09 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Thank you!                                                 

on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:08 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Thanks for the feedback! I know I didn't think I was very good at writing haikus either! 

on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:08 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Thanks!                                              

on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:07 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Thank you! That's what I thought when I wrote this!

on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:07 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Thanks!    

on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:06 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Thank you!  

Vicky11 SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:04 pm
Vicky11 SILVER, Charlottenlund, Other
9 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
The wisest men follow their own direction - Euripides

I loved this! I don't know why, but the whole ribbons of thought thing really apealed to me. Great work!

on Jul. 26 2011 at 1:11 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Thank you both for the feedback!

on Jul. 25 2011 at 9:37 am
TwasBrilling BRONZE, Staunton, Va, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The owl of Minerva spreads its wings only with the falling of the dusk" -H.W. Hegel

"Words are our most inexhaustable source of magic' -Albus Dumbledore

I agree...most haikus dont seem to have a message, or train of thought, but this does!

Megan.J.B said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:36 pm
Megan.J.B, Sault Ste Marie, Other
0 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here's the real truth. There are eight million people in this city. And those teeming masses exist for the sole purpose of lifting the few exceptional people onto their shoulders. You, me? We're exceptional."
- Green Goblin. :)

really amazing job! I usually hate haikus, but this one is suprisingly nice :)

on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:51 am
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
5 articles 3 photos 178 comments
Haikus are generally so unoriginal but this is amazing! Love it.

on Jul. 13 2011 at 12:26 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 578 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I love your haikus! This is amazing!!! :)

on Jul. 12 2011 at 8:40 am
ArgonElement SILVER, The Woodlands, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Question Authority.

It is so hard to write haikus! And even harder to write haikus that make sense! Haha (I am NOT a very good haiku writer) really great. :) Keep it up!


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