Immortal Passion

Love sparked, deep within,
Burning bright with blazing heat,
Immortal passion.





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Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 9:53 pm

Three small sentences that describe everything...beautiful :D

 

 
Garnet77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 12:27 am
This is descriptive and short at the same time. It's really good. :)
 
musicispassion said...
Jul. 10, 2011 at 1:28 pm
short and creative I love it it's beautiful
 
writer_girl said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 3:16 pm
Your haiku is full of creativity. Great job!
 
Silent_Artist said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 5:34 pm
I love haiku. Good job.
 
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