Dew Drop

May 27, 2011
By AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
17 articles 7 photos 131 comments

It mirrors the sky
and tells its glorious tale
A single dew drop.


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on Jan. 13 2012 at 4:56 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
17 articles 7 photos 131 comments
Thanks for reading and for your input! I'll keep that in mind :)

on Jan. 13 2012 at 4:48 pm
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons make grape juice. Then sit back and watch everyone look at you in amazement. :)

It would also make a really cool free-verse. Just sayin. ;)

on Jan. 13 2012 at 4:47 pm
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
40 articles 2 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons make grape juice. Then sit back and watch everyone look at you in amazement. :)

Really nice! If you wrote this in fourth grade, sometimes a nice thing to do is to go back to the feelings and emotions you had, and re-write the same idea over. I'd love to see what you could do with this idea now. :) -Lilac

on Dec. 16 2011 at 6:15 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
17 articles 7 photos 131 comments
XD thanks!!

on Dec. 16 2011 at 6:12 pm
daniskate416 BRONZE, Bristol, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death."-Taylor Swift

This is pretty darn awesome for a 4th grader....

on Aug. 25 2011 at 5:12 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
17 articles 7 photos 131 comments
Ooo that's a really good idea! Thanks!! :)

on Aug. 25 2011 at 4:48 pm
snaomi PLATINUM, Cheshire, Connecticut
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This is really cute.  I like the idea that a dewdrop could have a glorious tale to tell.  I wonder about the title though - it seems a little redundant.  If the title doesn't give away the secret, then the first two lines are sort of like a little riddle, building you up for discovering what "it" is.  Just a thought :)


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