Crying as trains pass
Knowing it'll go by soon
Then alone again
Knowing it'll go by soon
Then alone again
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Railroad Tracks
AriShine
I love this poem so much! Great work!
I like it a lot. It's cool how you can say so much with so few words. I think you could pick a few even better, more descriptive, words though
Thank you! I'll be sure to keep more descriptive words in mind for next time.
love ur haiku! i wish i can write something as nice as urs
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