Railroad Tracks MAG

April 22, 2011
By phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
224 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin


Crying as trains pass
Knowing it'll go by soon
Then alone again



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on Jul. 14 2014 at 2:25 pm
Bronwyn-Sophronia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
316 articles 10 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

great job! I love this so much!

on Feb. 1 2013 at 7:01 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
224 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin

Thank you so much!

AriShine GOLD said...
on Oct. 7 2012 at 12:27 pm
AriShine GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
13 articles 0 photos 131 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whatever you are, be a good one." -Abraham Lincoln

I love this poem so much! Great work!

on Feb. 20 2012 at 5:26 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
224 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin

Thank you! I'll be sure to keep more descriptive words in mind for next time.

on Feb. 20 2012 at 5:23 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
224 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin

Thank you so much!

on Feb. 6 2012 at 11:36 am
snoopy276 BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 3 comments
I like it a lot. It's cool how you can say so much with so few words. I think you could pick a few even better, more descriptive, words though

shizuka BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:36 pm
shizuka BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
1 article 0 photos 13 comments
love ur haiku! i wish i can write something as nice as urs


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