Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Railroad Tracks Railroad Tracks By phlogiston, Hermitage, TN More by this author Crying as trains pass Knowing it'll go by soon Then alone again This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 7 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Liv.Harris said... today at 2:25 pm: great job! I love this so much! Report abuse AriShine said... Oct. 7, 2012 at 12:27 pm: I love this poem so much! Great work! phlogiston replied... Feb. 1, 2013 at 7:01 pm : Thank you so much! Report abuse snoopy276 said... Feb. 6, 2012 at 11:36 am: I like it a lot. It's cool how you can say so much with so few words. I think you could pick a few even better, more descriptive, words though phlogiston replied... Feb. 20, 2012 at 5:26 pm : Thank you! I'll be sure to keep more descriptive words in mind for next time. Report abuse shizuka said... Nov. 29, 2011 at 7:36 pm: love ur haiku! i wish i can write something as nice as urs phlogiston replied... Feb. 20, 2012 at 5:23 pm : Thank you so much!