Spilled Blood

April 25, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments

If I had to say,
the best blood is spilled in love,
the worst in vengeance.


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on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:27 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! :D

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:09 am
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

dude, AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Jul. 21 2011 at 5:04 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

So true...

on Jun. 12 2011 at 1:12 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you very much! :)

on Jun. 12 2011 at 1:11 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you! :)

on Jun. 11 2011 at 9:56 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

How do you do it?!  I love all of your poems that I've read!

on Jun. 11 2011 at 8:23 pm
CieraDesiree GOLD, Hagerstown, Indiana
17 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye only makes the whole world blind.
You never know what you have until it's gone.

So short yet so meaningful. great job=)

on Jun. 6 2011 at 6:24 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you!

SamiLou SILVER said...
on Jun. 6 2011 at 2:37 pm
SamiLou SILVER, Lee&#39s Summit, Missouri
6 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imagining the future is a kind of nostalgia"
-John Green (Looking For Alaska)

You are so good at creating amazing haikus! i have never written one because i feel like i cannot put as much feeling into just three lines as you can :) my poems usually end up being much longer

on Jun. 6 2011 at 9:52 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

you're very welcome!!!!! ;))

on Jun. 5 2011 at 8:02 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you!

Dark_Mind GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 7:51 pm
Dark_Mind GOLD, Little Rock, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"Sounds like a Personal Problem."

This is now.!...I really like Haiku's.

on Jun. 5 2011 at 1:23 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you!

on Jun. 5 2011 at 11:30 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

I love how you put so much thought into those three lines!!! Very Good!!! :) )

on Jun. 2 2011 at 6:59 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! :)

on Jun. 2 2011 at 3:51 pm
Lilly3217 SILVER, Holly Hill, Florida
6 articles 2 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best time to plant a Oak tree was twenty years ago the second best time is today.

well keep writing your really good

 


on Jun. 2 2011 at 3:49 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Not that long...less than a year...

on Jun. 1 2011 at 9:47 pm
Lilly3217 SILVER, Holly Hill, Florida
6 articles 2 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best time to plant a Oak tree was twenty years ago the second best time is today.

how long have you been on teen ink? you have a lot of articles!!!!

on May. 29 2011 at 4:14 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! :)

on May. 29 2011 at 1:16 pm
yellowflower SILVER, Basking Ridge, New Jersey
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this is really good, so few words but they are so deep!


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