Spilled Blood

If I had to say,
the best blood is spilled in love,
the worst in vengeance.





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hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:09 am
dude, AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:27 am
Thanks! :D
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 5:04 pm
So true...
 
CieraDesiree said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 8:23 pm
So short yet so meaningful. great job=)
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 1:11 pm
Thank you! :)
 
SamiLou said...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 2:37 pm
You are so good at creating amazing haikus! i have never written one because i feel like i cannot put as much feeling into just three lines as you can :) my poems usually end up being much longer
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 6:24 pm
Thank you!
 
JoPepper said...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 11:30 am
I love how you put so much thought into those three lines!!! Very Good!!! :) )
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 1:23 pm
Thank you!
 
JoPepper replied...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 9:52 am
you're very welcome!!!!! ;))
 
Lilly3217 said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 9:47 pm
how long have you been on teen ink? you have a lot of articles!!!!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 3:49 pm
Not that long...less than a year...
 
Lilly3217 replied...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 3:51 pm

well keep writing your really good

 

 
Raytheraym replied...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 6:59 pm
Thanks! :)
 
yellowflower said...
May 29, 2011 at 1:16 pm
this is really good, so few words but they are so deep!
 
Raytheraym replied...
May 29, 2011 at 4:14 pm
Thanks! :)
 
Dark_Mind replied...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 7:51 pm
This is now.!...I really like Haiku's.
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 8:02 pm
Thank you!
 
Shadowrider replied...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 9:56 pm
How do you do it?!  I love all of your poems that I've read!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 1:12 pm
Thank you very much! :)
 
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