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April 2, 2011
By the_quiet_one BRONZE, Orangevale, California
the_quiet_one BRONZE, Orangevale, California
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Favorite Quote:
“I write for no other purpose than to add to the beauty that now belongs to me. I write a story for no other reason than to add three or four hundred acres to my magnificent estate.”
~Jack London (White Fang)


Hard eyes cripple the
heart; the man on the corner
checks his watch, tick tick.


The author's comments:
It a haiku. Just something I've been mulling over. Feedback please.

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on May. 13 2011 at 6:17 pm
Bgeekgirl24 GOLD, Bellefontaine, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Eat healthy. Excersize daily. Die anyway.

I like it. It makes you think.......

on May. 9 2011 at 7:31 pm
the_quiet_one BRONZE, Orangevale, California
3 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I write for no other purpose than to add to the beauty that now belongs to me. I write a story for no other reason than to add three or four hundred acres to my magnificent estate.”
~Jack London (White Fang)

Whoops. Typo in my comment under the image..... Haha. 


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