Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > The Awkward The Awkward By ellie315, South Pasadena, CA More by this author And gangly and dangly thing Couldn't even stand This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine. « Previous article More by this author Next article » September & October Join the Discussion This article has 5 comments. Post your own! Report abuse TimexxFlies said... today at 1:16 pm: I live right near Pasedena! Report abuse MaybeImCrazyButIThinkILoveYou said... Nov. 6, 2012 at 10:35 am: Superb! I sense sort of a... Fearlessness in your writing, if that makes sense :) Report abuse KnitsandPurls said... Sept. 1, 2012 at 1:29 pm: I am feeling the emotion come through in this piece, but am kind of confused. Are you talking about a person? The piece is strong, though! Report abuse AshlieSmileFace said... Jan. 5, 2012 at 10:59 am: Its kind of, too small. and doesnt make that good of sense.. ellie315 replied... Jan. 5, 2012 at 11:28 am : Well a haiku is by definition a three line poem with 5 syllables in the first and last line and 7 syllables in the middle.