A Glimpse in the Dark Ages

wow your a happy person and you came up with this dark poem

Wow, this makes my poetry look like an eight-year-old's! It's  very good.       Now if only I could improve my own . . .

*You can read my work if you want (but it's optional, unlike those people who comment just to say that), but you don't have to. I'm just saying that because you seem like a cool person. I don't really share my work to many people, so you're one of the elite . . . kind of kidding :)

Wow, this makes my poetry look like an eight-year-old's! It's  very good.       Now if only I could improve my own . . .

*You can read my work if you want (but it's optional, unlike those people who comment just to say that), but you don't have to. I'm just saying that because you seem like a cool person. I don't really share my work to many people, so you're one of the elite . . . kind of kidding :)

Wow, this makes my poetry look like an eight-year-old's! It's  very good.       Now if only I could improve my own . . .

*You can read my work if you want (but it's optional, unlike those people who comment just to say that), but you don't have to. I'm just saying that because you seem like a cool person. I don't really share my work to many people, so you're one of the elite . . . kind of kidding :)

Well your haiku is dark and intense---but that's a good thing! It gave me chills:)