Feather-Filled Pillow

Lying my head down,
I hear my pillow whisper,
As my dreams take flight...





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xxSlimShadyxx said...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 3:23 pm
I like this. Have a cookie :3
 
alanacarlene replied...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 5:10 pm
hahaha thanks i'd love one! that makes me feel like a child getting rewarded for saying her ABC's hahahahaha!!!!!!
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 8:27 am
Dang you're good at haikus!! This creates such a great picture in my mind!! Keep writing girlie you're SO good :)
 
alanacarlene replied...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 9:22 am
Okie dokie!!! thanks sooo much that means a lot to me you have no idea! but currently i have writer's block :\ so i got nothing right now. there's one poem pending that i wrote and i like it maybe you will too
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 10:00 am
Ugh! You too? My writers block has been here for a while and its SO frustrating!! I bet I will too :)
 
alanacarlene replied...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 3:25 pm
Yeah since BEFORE CHRISTMAS BREAK STARTED!!!! Ahhhhhhhhhh! i started writing a song but it's just not that great :\ and whenever my poem is submitted you'll know which poem i'm talking about
 
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