no copper ring on any finger MAG

November 29, 2010
By Michal_Z GOLD, New City, New York
Michal_Z GOLD, New City, New York
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she once sat on my
kitchen floor and cut off all
her hair, creating

a coppery ring
around her legs folded flat
under her body

now she lays down flat
her eyes shut with long dark hair
copper crowns her head



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