Breathless

By , Lake Elsinore, CA
Blazing orange and wet,
He swam happily, then drowned.
Neo, my goldfish.





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Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 3:58 pm
that last line comes out of nowhere! cool! read some of mine?
 
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