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Soft as crow's wings
breeze flutters in morning
calling people stop




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SassyJones said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 6:22 pm:
thanks! yeah it was supposed to be " as a crow's wings"
 
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Blue4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 5:22 pm:
It's nice, I like the deep message in here; you're short a syllable in the first line, though.
 
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