crow's wings

September 19, 2010
By SassyJones GOLD, Los Altos Hills, California
SassyJones GOLD, Los Altos Hills, California
13 articles 5 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We make our fourtunes, and we call them fate" earl of beaconsville.


Soft as crow's wings
breeze flutters in morning
calling people stop



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on Oct. 24 2011 at 6:22 pm
SassyJones GOLD, Los Altos Hills, California
13 articles 5 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We make our fourtunes, and we call them fate" earl of beaconsville.

thanks! yeah it was supposed to be " as a crow's wings"

on Oct. 24 2011 at 5:22 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

It's nice, I like the deep message in here; you're short a syllable in the first line, though.


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