crow's wings

September 19, 2010
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Soft as crow's wings
breeze flutters in morning
calling people stop

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SassyJones said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 6:22 pm
thanks! yeah it was supposed to be " as a crow's wings"
Blue4 said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 5:22 pm
It's nice, I like the deep message in here; you're short a syllable in the first line, though.
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