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Clouds roll in atop,
The almighty mountain peak,
And sighs can be heard.




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AngelsLullaby said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 4:36 pm:
This put me in a very peaceful state of mind. I loved it. I'm normally not into haikus, but this was great! 5/5 stars.
 
milforce replied...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 11:25 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
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RyanTyler said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 10:04 am:
Was the sigh a good thing or a bad thing because I think it would good either way. Keep it up. :):):)
 
milforce replied...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 6:41 am :
I'd say the sigh is a good sigh, because I hear as a sort of dreamy sigh, not the 'you didn't get your chores done' kind of sigh, you know? Thanks a lot!
 
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