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Shorter
as it burns,
Brighter
as it learns.
Life, a Candle.



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Wasi said...
Sept. 2, 2010 at 12:28 pm
this one touches me
 
Daani said...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 3:36 pm
The concept of the poem is amazing... And the way You've written...I dont think so anyone would've done that i a handfullof lines... Well....I like ur poetry :P
 
Kaptain replied...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 3:45 pm
thanks man it means a lot to me :)
 
condor said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 6:56 pm

ur poem is short but really nice i love the whole metaphor idea

nice work ;]

 
Kaptain replied...
Aug. 30, 2010 at 11:51 am
Thanks Condor (i like ur name) :P
 
condor replied...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 1:40 pm
ur very welcome oh and thanks for liking my name ;]
 
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