The Flame

August 3, 2010
By Kaptain SILVER, Dubai, Other
Kaptain SILVER, Dubai, Other
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Shorter
as it burns,
Brighter
as it learns.
Life, a Candle.



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on Sep. 4 2010 at 1:40 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

ur very welcome oh and thanks for liking my name ;]

Wasi said...
on Sep. 2 2010 at 12:28 pm
this one touches me

Kaptain SILVER said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 3:45 pm
Kaptain SILVER, Dubai, Other
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thanks man it means a lot to me :)

Daani said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 3:36 pm
The concept of the poem is amazing... And the way You've written...I dont think so anyone would've done that i a handfullof lines... Well....I like ur poetry :P

Kaptain SILVER said...
on Aug. 30 2010 at 11:51 am
Kaptain SILVER, Dubai, Other
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Thanks Condor (i like ur name) :P

on Aug. 29 2010 at 6:56 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

ur poem is short but really nice i love the whole metaphor idea

nice work ;]





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