Gloaming

July 30, 2010
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a bridge at twilight
it's beautiful... and lonely
snow begins to fall

paint you a picture
close your eyes and see my words
breathe in... breathe out... breathe

she stands in the cold
she's beautiful... and lonely
flakes fall... slow, silent

can you see her there?
painted picture, made of words
shall i speak you there?

join her in the cold
stand on the bridge at twilight
feel warmth in her smile





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Annika-Katryn said...
Sept. 5, 2010 at 5:42 pm
Thank you both, I appreciate the comments :)
 
simplieme said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 1:33 pm
One of the more heart warming haikus I've read in a while
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 8:03 pm
This poem was very heartwarming and ture. Thanks for writing it.
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 8:03 pm
Not ture... true.
 
Annika-Katryn replied...
Nov. 25, 2010 at 7:16 pm
I've read some of your work as well, and I like what you have. Let's both of us keep at it, eh?
 
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