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Infatuation's
unreciprocated love;
forgetting is hard.





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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 7:55 pm
This articulated the feeling so well. The best compliment I can give you is this: you are an artist of brevity.
 
KatLB said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 2:13 pm
I agree with Sky, it sounds so much more than just a crush. But at the time it feels like the biggest thing in the world, and you totally captured that. Great haiku!
 
sky_is_womb said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 12:38 pm
i liked how your choice of words made it sound very...advanced, professional. it makes it sound like so much more than just a "stupid teenage crush". very very beautifully written!
 
mandapanda9736 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 11:51 am
short and sweet and to the point! well done!
 
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