Outside

July 20, 2010
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Look outside, it's bright.
Maybe I should go out then,
Oh, I lost my shoes.





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DiamondsIntheGrass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 8:06 pm
was the last part an effort to make it humorus?
 
Sarah D. replied...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 2:08 pm
Every poem can be perceived in various different ways. It is simply up to the reader. This poem could have made you laugh, while making your neighbor cry. And this, my friend, is the beauty of poetry.
 
DiamondsIntheGrass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 4:16 pm
true.  did you think it was humorus?
 
Sarah D. replied...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 6:22 pm
I don't know, I guess. What did you think? I wasn't much of a fan of Haiku, then I saw yours. Good Job.
 
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