It's What You Do to Me

June 21, 2010
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The warmth of your breath
On my neck is all it takes
To make me forget





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pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 8:07 pm

 short yet incredibly powerful. amazing.

maybe you could read my story take me away? thanks!

 
sam013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 9:34 pm
of course! and thanks
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 7:20 pm
tres bien captain! very nicely done.
 
sam013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 7:46 pm
thanks! check out some of my other work! I would love your feedback :)
 
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