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They say we lost Mom,
But no matter where I look,
I cannot find her.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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OnedelaCrossThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 18, 2013 at 9:25 pm:
A powerful haiku can only be made by a powerful woman. Amazing!!!!!!
 
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MikaylaMcA said...
Mar. 27, 2013 at 4:36 pm:
This was so powerful! I love it!
 
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SaphiraBrightscales said...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 9:36 am:
This was beautiful and saddening. So sorry for the loss. The poem however: totally amazing!
 
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FauxedTea said...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 11:56 pm:
It's simple, very much like a child's train of thought. I LOVE it!
 
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The_Quiet_Girl said...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 6:32 pm:
I love the tragic beauty of this poem. You did a wonderful job.
 
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AndAllThatJazz said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 2:29 pm:
wow. that is sad and powerful and... I don't even know. It just hits you with the tragity of losing someone.
 
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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 1:47 pm:
Makes me wonder~ I am speechless. Great job!
 
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inkers This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 3:52 pm:
You accomplished so much in only 17 syllables. Amazing job! <3
 
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thetruthishere94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 8:13 pm:
I love this haiku and completely understand why they chose it to be published! Congrats! It is a very clever poem and it is amazing how you can write such a piece of work in such few words. 
 
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OriginalCarbonation said...
May 24, 2011 at 5:35 pm:
congrats on getting into the magazine!!! :D how cool! i think this is really powerful, which is why they chose it, but i really love your other work (even more than this one; im a sucker for length) so i hope that those get in too :)
 
sonnysulouff This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 24, 2011 at 8:03 pm :
thanks, that's really nice of you!
 
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nickykens This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 12:50 am:
I'm not a haiku person, but I love it!
 
sonnysulouff This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 12:19 pm :
Thanks so much! :)
 
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