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Slave

Skin black as the night
Eyes brown as honey suckle
Enslaved till his death.




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TheOcherousRodentia said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 12:21 pm:

WONDROUS, I love the first lines

``Skin black as the night``

``Eyes brown as honey suckle``

Fantastic imaginery and artistry. Love it! 5 STARS FOR SURE

 
XOXOhaloXOXO This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 8:54 am :
Haha, thank you very much. I don't usually write in this genre, but I thought I would give it a go.=]
 
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