True love is when...

June 16, 2010
By Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"


I make it clear that
Our door is closed forever
But you keep knocking.


The author's comments:
Another point of view about love and how if you really love someone, you'll fight for them.

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on Jan. 11 2012 at 8:17 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

It was short but there are alot of ways you can interpret it. I liked it:) Please comment and rate my work:)

on Nov. 13 2010 at 10:01 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

thankyou so much and dont worry about it i will!!

on Nov. 12 2010 at 7:56 am
stephie95 PLATINUM, Tripoli, Other
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it really good.. simple and nice.. can u plz check nd comment my work!! thx

on Aug. 14 2010 at 8:45 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

kk:))))))))

on Aug. 14 2010 at 8:44 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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your welcome, for sure. check out some of my stuff too, if you can.

on Aug. 14 2010 at 6:11 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

ummm thankyou-i think:)

on Aug. 14 2010 at 3:07 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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At first, I thought this was really stupid, because I've always found it annoying when people are persistant even though you closed the door. Then, I sort of laughed because there are many sides to this poem. I like it.

on Aug. 11 2010 at 9:56 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

thanks!!!!:)

lamelola GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 9:53 pm
lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
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The problem is, you think you have time.

Great saying :)

on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:15 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

thankyou and of course:)

on Aug. 10 2010 at 2:20 pm
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

very good :) i like your writing. could you rate and comment on some of mine? i would love to hear your opinion :)

on Aug. 5 2010 at 11:07 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

thanks!!!:)

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on Aug. 5 2010 at 9:10 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Nice nice!!

Good job! :)))


on Jul. 30 2010 at 6:04 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow thankyou so much!! i will for sure:)

on Jul. 30 2010 at 6:00 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
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"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

That was like super super super good! i love it! very creative! probably the best hauki i've ever read! great job :) if you could rate on comment on my work when you get the chance i'd appreiate it :)




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