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Little parachutes
Hold soft blossoms in the breeze
Landing at my feet





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Sensory Overload III said...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 10:46 am
I love the double entendre of you seeing in the flower a parachute as you escape in your daydream as the flower falls at your feet.  It is done so softly I missed it on the first couple readings and it struck me only when ruminating about it later.  Excellent work.  Keep writing. 
 
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