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Her popsicle drips
down her chin onto her dress
she only giggles





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Patience97 said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 12:34 am
Wow so great! Because "all kids are innocent," right?
 
WhiteBear said...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 8:41 am
this is really good!! love the child-like innocence of this poem, and the feel good feeling that comes with it! gr8 haiku :-)
 
shoutitloud This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 1:34 pm
thank you so much!(: and yea, i tried to give it a light and simplistic feel to really play up the whole innocence thing!
 
AbbyQ This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 3:26 am
Perfect job capturing the perfect picture of perfect innocence. Wonderful job.
 
shoutitloud This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 4:16 pm
thank you so much! that comment means a lot(:
 
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