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I write this poem to,
Those who hide in the shadows,
And cover their eyes.

Not to brave souls who,
Choose to stand up and fight but,
To anonymous.



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HuntressEmma said...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 4:28 pm:

Very good! However isn't that first line 6 syllables? Haikus go 5,7,5.

I write this poem to

1 + 1 + 1 +  2  +  1= 6

 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 8:45 pm :
Yeah but u can say poem with one sylable or two... i chose one
 
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hancampbell said...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 11:19 pm:
Oh my gosh, I love this!!
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 1:16 pm :
Thankyou!!!
 
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DiamondsIntheGrass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 7:17 pm:
love this. :D
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 12:13 am :
Thankyou so much!!
 
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avantgarde said...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 6:27 pm:
This poem is deep and strong! I love it; the beauty is, well, beautiful :) Great job!
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 12:52 pm :
Thanks!!!          
 
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Seelix said...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 9:28 pm:
Beautiful! This haiku does an ecelent job of conveying the author's emotion and unlike  most haikus it stays with you after you read it.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 6:04 pm :
Thanks so much!!!
 
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GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 8:20 am:
Haiku are harder to write because since they're so short, its hard to squeeze some emotion in there, but I definintely feel like you packed some in! Great job - Check out my haiku Perseverant Nature? Thanks and keep writing!
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 4:21 pm :
Thanks so much!! I wil!!!
 
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just.me_899 said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 10:57 pm:
that was nice  :) but i want more! hehe i liked wat i was readin, so... :D
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 1:44 pm :
Thanks!!!!
 
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Dawnheart said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 7:06 pm:
So simple, yet, so amazing! I loved it! :D
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 7:45 pm :
Thankyou!!!!
 
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MelanieLouise This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 6:09 pm:
great job :) keep writing, Mel. check out my piece if you would like
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 7:01 pm :
Thanks so mcuh!!! i will!!
 
MelanieLouise This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 11:57 am :
came back and had to read it again :) more pieces on my page btw !
 
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Solipsism=Confusion said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 3:06 pm:
A really great piece. I just love its simplicity. Keep it up! 
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 7:01 pm :
Thankyou!!!
 
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