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I write this poem to,
Those who hide in the shadows,
And cover their eyes.

Not to brave souls who,
Choose to stand up and fight but,
To anonymous.



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Noitcif_plup_92 said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 9:59 pm:
That is the best haiku, I've ever read. No joke.
 
htrae22 replied...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 7:35 pm :
great job keep writing
 
crubs33 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 1:11 am :
thanks so much!!!!!!!
 
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Chibbie said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 1:30 pm:
You write with passion, honesty and directly :) I don't go with the rules of writing though I go with the emotion and let me tell you... It was AMAZING
 
crubs33 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 1:11 am :
thankyou!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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Mariah_13 said...
Dec. 24, 2010 at 11:48 am:

How about Instead of I write this poem To, which is six syllables you write

This Poem Is For,

.....

 
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DawnMarie said...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 6:59 pm:
Nice...but it isn't a haiku. Check your syllables again, line one has 6 syllables! Hahaha (: 
 
Doves_and_Ravens replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 8:43 am :
No it doesn't. Poem can be pronounced two different ways. (Pome instead of po-em).
 
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MizzCizz said...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 1:30 pm:
Brill! i Would love to see more. x
 
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echome94 said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 5:48 pm:
This is beautiful, not everybody knows how to write a haiku. You did a great job, i tried to write one called Seaweed Dreams but im not sure mine was as clear as yours.
 
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Kali123 said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 7:41 am:
great Haiku. love the emotion behind it too
 
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CammyLashay said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 9:30 am:

love it truly but im an voice that speaks i dont hide but ive once been this person

 

 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 10:26 am :
Thanks so much
 
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choreographer218 said...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 9:32 pm:

2 things:

1. I like how the picture you chose sets the mood for the poem. Very well written!

2. I saw your profile picture, and what is so funny is the second I saw it I was like, that is my favorite flower picture off google, and I actually drew that flower in art class last year! How much of a coincidence is that?

 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 10:21 pm :

haha omg thats so amazing!!!

Thanks:))))

 
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mimirocks124This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 6:10 pm:
amazing <3
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 10:26 am :
Thanks!!     
 
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snoopy4me<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 11:04 am:
strong and concise. awesome! 
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 8:44 pm :
Thanks!!!!!
 
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HuntressEmma said...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 4:28 pm:

Very good! However isn't that first line 6 syllables? Haikus go 5,7,5.

I write this poem to

1 + 1 + 1 +  2  +  1= 6

 
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