To Anonymous

June 4, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


I write this poem to,
Those who hide in the shadows,
And cover their eyes.

Not to brave souls who,
Choose to stand up and fight but,
To anonymous.



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librarylady said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 2:04 pm
A library in Wake County, North Carolina

on Mar. 27 2011 at 4:05 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

what library??      

on Mar. 27 2011 at 4:05 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

sure:)        

librarylady said...
on Mar. 9 2011 at 3:52 pm
crubs33 this is excellent! Can I put it on display at my library?? I will give you full cred.

on Feb. 23 2011 at 12:07 pm
Jessica2011 BRONZE, Elgin, Illinois
4 articles 1 photo 1 comment
Hey! I really liked this haiku a lot. I think it stands out to those who tend to keep to the crowd and go with the flow. I think, in my opinion, it is a wake up call to all those voices we have yet to hear!

lollypops GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 7:35 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
16 articles 5 photos 219 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live

great job keep writing

on Jan. 16 2011 at 9:59 pm
Noitcif_Plup SILVER, Argenta, Illinois
5 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's only after we've lost everything that we're free to do anything." - Tyler Durden

That is the best haiku, I've ever read. No joke.

on Jan. 16 2011 at 1:30 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
38 articles 8 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)

You write with passion, honesty and directly :) I don't go with the rules of writing though I go with the emotion and let me tell you... It was AMAZING

on Dec. 24 2010 at 11:48 am
Mariah_13 PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
27 articles 9 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

How about Instead of I write this poem To, which is six syllables you write

This Poem Is For,

.....


on Dec. 4 2010 at 6:59 pm
DawnMarie BRONZE, Milton, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
a bird doesn't sing because it has an answer,
it sings because it has a song. - lou holtz

Nice...but it isn't a haiku. Check your syllables again, line one has 6 syllables! Hahaha (: 

on Dec. 3 2010 at 1:30 pm
MizzCizz BRONZE, Warrington, Other
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments
Brill! i Would love to see more. x

on Nov. 17 2010 at 5:48 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


~Unknown~

This is beautiful, not everybody knows how to write a haiku. You did a great job, i tried to write one called Seaweed Dreams but im not sure mine was as clear as yours.

Kali123 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 7:41 am
Kali123 BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
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great Haiku. love the emotion behind it too

on Oct. 20 2010 at 10:26 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!     

on Oct. 20 2010 at 10:26 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so much

on Oct. 20 2010 at 9:30 am
CammyLashay SILVER, Java, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Failure is not for me.

love it truly but im an voice that speaks i dont hide but ive once been this person

 


on Oct. 9 2010 at 10:21 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

haha omg thats so amazing!!!

Thanks:))))


on Oct. 9 2010 at 9:32 pm
choreographer218 SILVER, Prairie Village, Kansas
8 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Success is simply a matter of luck. Ask any failure.
-- Earl Wilson

2 things:

1. I like how the picture you chose sets the mood for the poem. Very well written!

2. I saw your profile picture, and what is so funny is the second I saw it I was like, that is my favorite flower picture off google, and I actually drew that flower in art class last year! How much of a coincidence is that?


on Oct. 6 2010 at 6:10 pm
meganwagner21 PLATINUM, Old Bridge, New Jersey
42 articles 0 photos 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes good things have to fall apart so better things can fall together." -Marilyn Monroe
"Nobody can go back and make a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending." -Maria Robinson

amazing <3

on Oct. 2 2010 at 8:45 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Yeah but u can say poem with one sylable or two... i chose one




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