Blue Sky

May 31, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."


Beautiful clear blue sky,
Craning my neck to see you,
How vast you are today.



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on Feb. 5 2011 at 10:30 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Thanks! I'm glad you do like it! :)

KK2013 GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2011 at 3:05 pm
KK2013 GOLD, Solon, Ohio
10 articles 2 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Age is foolish and forgetful when it underestimates youth.-J. K. Rowling

Wow, I like this one a lot... it's unique, addressing an inanimate object...

on Oct. 1 2010 at 4:27 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Thank you sooooo super duper much! Yeah it's probably one of my favorite haikus of mine too :)

on Sep. 30 2010 at 8:54 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

This one is probably my favorite out of all your haikus. It's like you're just realizing how huge the sky is and how much it holds. Love it. Wow. :D

on Jul. 1 2010 at 12:45 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Ok I went back to the other comment you made. And thank you so much I'm glad you like this poem that means a lot to me! I agree I like this poem better.

Origianally this wasn't a Haiku I just had bits and pieces of it made into a smaller poem but I made small changes to turn it into a Haiku and I guess it worked!

Thank you!


on Jun. 30 2010 at 10:12 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
30 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Ok, if you haven't read my comment on your other poem. Go to that and then come back.

All right. I LOVE this. It's perfect in everyway. 5/5 stars! A MILLION times better than your other one. Great job!





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