Blue Sky

Beautiful clear blue sky,
Craning my neck to see you,
How vast you are today.





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KK2013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 3:05 pm
Wow, I like this one a lot... it's unique, addressing an inanimate object...
 
alanacarlene replied...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 10:30 am
Thanks! I'm glad you do like it! :)
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 8:54 pm
This one is probably my favorite out of all your haikus. It's like you're just realizing how huge the sky is and how much it holds. Love it. Wow. :D
 
alanacarlene replied...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 4:27 pm
Thank you sooooo super duper much! Yeah it's probably one of my favorite haikus of mine too :)
 
sleeplessdreamer said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 10:12 pm

Ok, if you haven't read my comment on your other poem. Go to that and then come back.

All right. I LOVE this. It's perfect in everyway. 5/5 stars! A MILLION times better than your other one. Great job!

 
alanacarlene replied...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 12:45 am

Ok I went back to the other comment you made. And thank you so much I'm glad you like this poem that means a lot to me! I agree I like this poem better.

Origianally this wasn't a Haiku I just had bits and pieces of it made into a smaller poem but I made small changes to turn it into a Haiku and I guess it worked!

Thank you!

 
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