The Blacked Out Sun

May 30, 2010
In the blacked out sun
Lies the mystery of God
And why we punch walls

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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 4:37 pm
I really liked this poem! I'm usually not swept away by any haikus, but this was so interestingly worded that it really caught my attention. Very well done with this, in its truthfulness.
A.Dreamer said...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 9:14 pm

Hey! You're right, I'm Angie. Nice to meet another J7X member. :)


I actually understand it. :) It makes you wonder what the meaning is after you finish reading it. I like how it leaves you wondering, amazing job!

mrsneverjonas_899 said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 10:44 am
i like how this really makes u think -like about the meaning :) can i ask wat YOUR own lil message was?
riley... replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 1:35 pm
i was thinking that we learn the most about life during the hard times. thanks for the feedback! :)
Meganchrisitne said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 9:57 am
I have to be honest this is a tad confusing.
riley... replied...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 2:26 pm
i know haha it was the first haiku i had ever written. oh well
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