The Blacked Out Sun

May 30, 2010
By riley... GOLD, Yakima, Washington
riley... GOLD, Yakima, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"i became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity." edgar allen poe.


In the blacked out sun
Lies the mystery of God
And why we punch walls

The author's comments:
Take from it what you will, I guess :)

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on Aug. 23 2010 at 4:37 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I really liked this poem! I'm usually not swept away by any haikus, but this was so interestingly worded that it really caught my attention. Very well done with this, in its truthfulness.

riley... GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 1:35 pm
riley... GOLD, Yakima, Washington
13 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity." edgar allen poe.

i was thinking that we learn the most about life during the hard times. thanks for the feedback! :)

on Aug. 17 2010 at 9:14 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 431 comments

Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

Hey! You're right, I'm Angie. Nice to meet another J7X member. :)

 

I actually understand it. :) It makes you wonder what the meaning is after you finish reading it. I like how it leaves you wondering, amazing job!


on Aug. 12 2010 at 10:44 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

i like how this really makes u think -like about the meaning :) can i ask wat YOUR own lil message was?

riley... GOLD said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 2:26 pm
riley... GOLD, Yakima, Washington
13 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity." edgar allen poe.

i know haha it was the first haiku i had ever written. oh well

on Jul. 19 2010 at 9:57 am
Meganchristine BRONZE, Millville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"You can do no wrong in the eyes of a follower"

“To accomplish great things, we must not only act, but also dream; not only plan, but also believe.”

I have to be honest this is a tad confusing.


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