In the blacked out sun
Lies the mystery of God
And why we punch walls
Lies the mystery of God
And why we punch walls
Thesilentraven
I really liked this poem! I'm usually not swept away by any haikus, but this was so interestingly worded that it really caught my attention. Very well done with this, in its truthfulness.
A.DreamerHey! You're right, I'm Angie. Nice to meet another J7X member. :)
I actually understand it. :) It makes you wonder what the meaning is after you finish reading it. I like how it leaves you wondering, amazing job!
mrsneverjonas_899i like how this really makes u think -like about the meaning :) can i ask wat YOUR own lil message was?
i was thinking that we learn the most about life during the hard times. thanks for the feedback! :)
MeganchrisitneI have to be honest this is a tad confusing.
i know haha it was the first haiku i had ever written. oh well
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