The Drink Of Music

May 24, 2010
By BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)


Music pours in sweet
and heavy, Mixing in my
veins, My melody.

Like blending spices,
Chop up the lyrics and pour
in the sound, Dancing.

On your tongue, In your
tastebuds, Let the music flow,
Make a timeless mist.

Spread that warm feeling,
Throughout your body let it
flow, Dissolving song.



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LastChapter said...
on Dec. 18 2010 at 10:50 am
LastChapter, Hempstead, New York
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Favorite Quote:
(couldn't think of anything better at the time) "Take the first step in faith. You don't have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step."-Dr.Martin Luther King Jr.

i love all the metaphors! great job! please comment on my work:)

on Dec. 9 2010 at 10:04 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thank you, I'm glad we share a common interest thru this poem and I'm happy you enjoyed it  :D

-Rose


MRose911 GOLD said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 5:18 pm
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"No boy is worth crying over and the one who is won't make you cry." - Sarah Kane

This is amazing! :) I love music and this poem! :)

on Jun. 16 2010 at 5:53 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thanks so much for your comment!  It really helps to get them!  :D

-Rose


blippi SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 1:10 pm
blippi SILVER, Two Rivers, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the words the happy say are but paltry melody, but those the silent feel are beautiful"-Emily Dickinson

I like the simplicity of this poem! It matches the simplicity and beauty of the moment. bravo!


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