The Drink Of Music

Music pours in sweet
and heavy, Mixing in my
veins, My melody.

Like blending spices,
Chop up the lyrics and pour
in the sound, Dancing.

On your tongue, In your
tastebuds, Let the music flow,
Make a timeless mist.

Spread that warm feeling,
Throughout your body let it
flow, Dissolving song.





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LastChapter said...
Dec. 18, 2010 at 10:50 am
i love all the metaphors! great job! please comment on my work:)
 
MRose911 said...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 5:18 pm
This is amazing! :) I love music and this poem! :)
 
BleedingRose replied...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 10:04 am

Thank you, I'm glad we share a common interest thru this poem and I'm happy you enjoyed it  :D

-Rose

 
blippi said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 1:10 pm
I like the simplicity of this poem! It matches the simplicity and beauty of the moment. bravo!
 
BleedingRose replied...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 5:53 pm

Thanks so much for your comment!  It really helps to get them!  :D

-Rose

 
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