Being With You

May 17, 2010
By , Marietta, GA
The feeling I have
Being with you today
Makes me feel giddy

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coly33 said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 3:38 pm

well it was very short i usually like short poems some times but it could have been better like extent your vocabulary and make it a little longer

other than that i loved it truely loved it


Nirvana said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 12:24 pm
hmm. i kinda like it
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