Blue Rose

Dancing rose curtsys.
Dripping its dew to the earth
Like a tear it falls.





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Patience97 said...
May 28, 2010 at 6:29 am
Wow your poem is really great! I love the comparison you made in the first line with the rose and the dancer!! Check out my work :)
 
Ninten1992 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 28, 2010 at 8:47 pm
Thanks! I will glady check out your work. :)
 
Ninten1992 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 28, 2010 at 11:05 pm
Oops, Spelled "gladly" wrong sorry. :(
 
Rose_in_the_Concrete said...
May 27, 2010 at 7:55 pm
wow! this is really good x] keep on writing!
 
Ninten1992 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 28, 2010 at 8:48 pm
Thanks for your encouraging comment. :)
 
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