So soft, so luscious
Across my cheek it brushes
And my breath rushes
Across my cheek it brushes
And my breath rushes
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
A Kiss
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hardwaterxxThis is really good, sounds like my first kiss. (:
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shafer15this is really good...it reminds me of my first kiss. thats the good thing about haiku... your trying to describe something in just a few short lines...keep writing your awesome
Thank you! I am sure you have read this before, but I am a fan of your poetry also.
TUBBZ-6you should have a little more detail it sounds like your first kiss
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ShahedI agree with TUBBZ-6 Add few more lines, it will make it more intresting, I like the way it rhymes by the way!
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