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Sitting in the sun,
Frying just like KFC,
Im going home now.



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mallory14 said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 8:05 pm:
i guess ill be the first to comment you should definetly consider like free verse. i like how you think though. but try writing deeper poems or if you wanna stick to ones like this . think of like a topic about something that you can reallly relate to..that way when people read it theyll be like wow i can really fit into his shoes...i love poetry ummm feel free to check mine out but please write more..cuz now you got me curious:P
 
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