Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > My Sun My Sun By Riki-Mo, Manassas, VA More by this author That your smile will break through this Ubiquitous fog. I'm optimistic This apocalyptic storm Is just a drizzle. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 5 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Boosflash said... May 16, 2010 at 8:27 am: i forgot to tell you why i like this one, "this apocalyptic storm is just a drizzle"-genius. you should write for those suicide thinkers out there..... Report abuse Boosflash said... May 16, 2010 at 8:25 am: you know, youre really creative...i like this piece. 5 stars captain. P.S.-you shouldnt define words with words that we also dont know the meaning of. were third graders captain. Report abuse ~EmilyC~ said... May 13, 2010 at 3:39 pm: Amazing! (Except, what does ubiquitous mean?) ....! replied... May 13, 2010 at 6:09 pm : lol thanks :) u·biq·ui·tous -adjective - existing or being everywhere, esp. at the same time; omnipresent ~EmilyC~ replied... May 13, 2010 at 9:11 pm : Oh I think you told me that in math or Signet or something...anyway, really great!