My Sun

April 15, 2010
By Riki-Mo GOLD, Manassas, Virginia
Riki-Mo GOLD, Manassas, Virginia
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I am confident
That your smile will break through this
Ubiquitous fog.

I'm optimistic
This apocalyptic storm
Is just a drizzle.



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on May. 16 2010 at 8:27 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i forgot to tell you why i like this one, "this apocalyptic storm is just a drizzle"-genius. you should write for those suicide thinkers out there.....

on May. 16 2010 at 8:25 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you know, youre really creative...i like this piece. 5 stars captain.

P.S.-you shouldnt define words with words that we also dont know the meaning of. were third graders captain.


on May. 13 2010 at 9:11 pm
EmilyMichelle PLATINUM, Manassas, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Our truest responsibility to the irrationality of the world is to paint or sing or write, for only in such response do we find the truth."
- Madeleine L'Engle

Oh I think you told me that in math or Signet or something...anyway, really great!

Riki-Mo GOLD said...
on May. 13 2010 at 6:09 pm
Riki-Mo GOLD, Manassas, Virginia
16 articles 0 photos 23 comments
lol thanks :)  u·biq·ui·tous -adjective - existing or being everywhere, esp. at the same time; omnipresent

on May. 13 2010 at 3:39 pm
EmilyMichelle PLATINUM, Manassas, Virginia
33 articles 4 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our truest responsibility to the irrationality of the world is to paint or sing or write, for only in such response do we find the truth."
- Madeleine L'Engle

Amazing! (Except, what does ubiquitous mean?)


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