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You don't understand
I'm here but you don't see me
Don't know what I am



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phlogistonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 11, 2012 at 1:58 pm:
I feel like this all the time. Great work!
 
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Silver2blackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 11, 2012 at 4:44 am:
Little words, Lots of meaning!
 
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Silver2blackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 11, 2012 at 4:44 am:
Little words, Lots of meaning!
 
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HiddenAngelInTheDark said...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 3:23 pm:
One word: Awesomeness and beautiful
 
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NNNEEEOOO11 said...
Mar. 1, 2012 at 8:12 pm:
This is very beautiful. Well done!
 
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HeyHay said...
Feb. 8, 2012 at 11:19 pm:
ALOT of people can really relate to this. Sometimes, people just don't really care and assume something of a person when they don't really know them. Beautiful... :D
 
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meadowood said...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 6:07 pm:
Love. Love. LOVE!
 
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ellabella said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 6:41 pm:
Awesome! Speaks actions!
 
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poetrylyrics said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 9:15 am:
I feel the same way. Sometimes people dont really see who we are , but what they want to see. Check out my first poem. : )
 
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nicole.ryan said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 11:54 am:
I liked this poem because I like how you can feel the emotions throughout it even though it's short.
 
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leahmersicano said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 11:53 am:
I like this poem because I can relate to it and I know how she feels.
 
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Dominicano_Loco said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 9:12 am:
it's there's an air of mystery around this haiku. there can be several reasons why you wrote this. I look forward to reading more from you. :)
 
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cammie300 said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 6:07 pm:
i like this peom it's mysterious it's short and sweet but keeps u on edge. I thinnk u might b one of my fav teenink authors Keep writting you've got talent!!
 
sam013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 7:34 pm :
thanks! that means a lot :)
 
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NewDarkness said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 9:42 pm:
I really like this is makes me think
 
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pnkninja11 said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 7:23 am:
I like this poem. It leaves mystery behind it. I'm here but you don't see me Don't know what I am. It keeps you guessing.
 
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pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 9, 2010 at 12:25 pm:
hmm...i really like this...the picture goes perfectly with it too(: 5 stars(;
 
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Tara M. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 5:16 pm:
i like this, its confusing in the secretive way, nice!
 
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TheOcherousRodentia said...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 9:40 am:
This really nice, and secretive :) I actually wrote a poem almost opposite of this one
 
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Starique said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 11:29 pm:
that's really good! i wrote one kind of like it (its pending)
 
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