Hiding Me

This is very beautiful. Well done!

ALOT of people can really relate to this. Sometimes, people just don't really care and assume something of a person when they don't really know them. Beautiful... :D

Love. Love. LOVE!

Awesome! Speaks actions!

I feel the same way. Sometimes people dont really see who we are , but what they want to see. Check out my first poem. : )

I liked this poem because I like how you can feel the emotions throughout it even though it's short.

I like this poem because I can relate to it and I know how she feels.

it's there's an air of mystery around this haiku. there can be several reasons why you wrote this. I look forward to reading more from you. :)

i like this peom it's mysterious it's short and sweet but keeps u on edge. I thinnk u might b one of my fav teenink authors Keep writting you've got talent!!

I like this poem. It leaves mystery behind it. I'm here but you don't see me Don't know what I am. It keeps you guessing.

hmm...i really like this...the picture goes perfectly with it too(: 5 stars(;

i like this, its confusing in the secretive way, nice!

This really nice, and secretive :) I actually wrote a poem almost opposite of this one

that's really good! i wrote one kind of like it (its pending)

This is a really good haiku. This one totally relates to me. Especially when I'm in the corner looking at my crush, wondering if he could see me and feel what I feel for him...haha nice job. Keep it up!

THIS IS AMAZING!! and really really really deep.  i agree with it.

super deep. didn't waste a syllable!!

hey you should check out my haiku Desperate. I think you would like it

Reminds me of Ezra Pound. Not a lot of words of it gets the message across.

Deep. Very, very deep.

thanks for agreeing wit me

Dude that was the best 3 line poem ever.

So much meaning in so little lines

Sometimes short lines are more valuable than a two page poem! I like it!

Check out my work, I want to know your opinion :)

really good, I love how it's short and it anyone who reads it can know what your feeling

Short but you got the heartbreaking message across. I like this. 

thanks everyone!

This is so good and well thought out... Eilatan is right; keeping it short and secretive was perfect!

This is really powerful. I like the secrecy, good choice of picture as well. 5 stars.

wow. good job! i know how u feel, defiantly. 5 stars