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falling on my own

I fell way too hard.
Alone and with no one else.
Now I cannot breathe.





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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 16, 2010 at 8:50 am
this is really good. youre really good-i think i said that already. your 17 lines are excellently.....-you should try CPR.
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 16, 2010 at 10:07 am
thanks so much! and yes you did ;D and i don't get the last part? :P 
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 16, 2010 at 10:59 pm
if you cant breathe then try cpr-but you dont have to get it. if you have no idea what i'm saying then just sit back and say"uh huh, yeah". if you really know what i'm saying then your more confused then i am.
 
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