Shrimping

March 12, 2010
By live.laugh.spaz GOLD, Singapore, Singapore, Other
live.laugh.spaz GOLD, Singapore, Singapore, Other
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laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects


Gills inhaled water
Bubbles rippled at surface
Fins swerved with the waves
Fork stabs through the sea
He struggles to swim away
Should have moved faster



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on Mar. 28 2010 at 3:22 am
live.laugh.spaz GOLD, Singapore, Singapore, Other
11 articles 11 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects

thanks so much :) i'll definately check out your work...please check out some of my other stuff too :D

Milo! said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 8:36 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.




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