Shrimping

March 12, 2010
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Gills inhaled water
Bubbles rippled at surface
Fins swerved with the waves
Fork stabs through the sea
He struggles to swim away
Should have moved faster





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Milo! said...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 8:36 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
live.laugh.spaz replied...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 3:22 am
thanks so much :) i'll definately check out your work...please check out some of my other stuff too :D
 
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