Flames

February 26, 2010
By xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3


Burning flesh is all

you can feel, all you can smell;

When will this pain cease?


The author's comments:
This was meant to be able to be taken into perspective different ways.
Metaphorically or realistically. To feel like your being burned inside because of emotional or mental distress, or well, being literally burned. I really don't have any idea where this came from. Plz comment! Criticism always welcome:)

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on Jun. 2 2010 at 7:13 am
invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable

thnx  :D 

on May. 31 2010 at 8:59 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

sure id luv 2:)

on May. 14 2010 at 7:20 am
invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
14 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable

yeah, i know a lot of people who write very dark and disturbing pieces sooooo... i'm kinda used to it. plz check out my new poems. i think 4 were just put online and 2 are waiting.. so thnx

on May. 11 2010 at 6:17 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

lol thanxxxx. i usually am not 1 2 really write dark pieces, but this kinda just came to me from somewhere. really appreciate the feedbackk! :)

on May. 11 2010 at 7:13 am
invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
14 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable

kinda disturbing in a good way. i loved it!  you say so much in so little of words

 


on Apr. 15 2010 at 2:43 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

awe, thanx so much!!

on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:46 pm
imperfection GOLD, Gilroy, California
17 articles 9 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dream as though you'll live forever, live as though you'll die today."
~James Dean (1931-1955), American Motion Picture Actor, symbol of rebellion

I would say that this is the best haiku I've ever read. It has so much meaning in just seventeen syllables... A++!

on Apr. 12 2010 at 6:13 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

thankkk uu!!! ;)) id luv 2 read some of ur work

on Mar. 27 2010 at 5:15 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
51 articles 0 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

Wow, this is good, it's short and sweet, but with a lot of meaning! Oh and ty for commenting on my stuff, It made my day, so yeah, Great job, totally a 5/5

on Mar. 10 2010 at 3:27 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death."
— Taylor Swift

I like this one


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