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Burning flesh is all

you can feel, all you can smell;

When will this pain cease?





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invisible13 said...
May 11, 2010 at 7:13 am

kinda disturbing in a good way. i loved it!  you say so much in so little of words

 

 
xBaByGiRrL22x replied...
May 11, 2010 at 6:17 pm
lol thanxxxx. i usually am not 1 2 really write dark pieces, but this kinda just came to me from somewhere. really appreciate the feedbackk! :)
 
invisible13 replied...
May 14, 2010 at 7:20 am
yeah, i know a lot of people who write very dark and disturbing pieces sooooo... i'm kinda used to it. plz check out my new poems. i think 4 were just put online and 2 are waiting.. so thnx
 
xBaByGiRrL22x replied...
May 31, 2010 at 8:59 pm
sure id luv 2:)
 
invisible13 replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 7:13 am
thnx  :D 
 
EmmaM said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:46 pm
I would say that this is the best haiku I've ever read. It has so much meaning in just seventeen syllables... A++!
 
xBaByGiRrL22x replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 2:43 pm
awe, thanx so much!!
 
FlyleafFreak said...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 5:15 pm
Wow, this is good, it's short and sweet, but with a lot of meaning! Oh and ty for commenting on my stuff, It made my day, so yeah, Great job, totally a 5/5
 
xBaByGiRrL22x replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 6:13 pm
thankkk uu!!! ;)) id luv 2 read some of ur work
 
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 3:27 pm
I like this one
 
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