Second Chances MAG

February 16, 2010
By BradTastic17 GOLD, Russell, Other
BradTastic17 GOLD, Russell, Other
12 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
I just ate an entire box of Lucky Charms cereal and I swear to god I can see into the future. ~Kurt Hummel


If second chances
Could be purchased at a store
I'd be first in line.

I'd buy a ticket
Back to when it would have mattered
And tell you the truth.


The author's comments:
This Haiku is mostly about regretting not seizing the moment when the chance presented itself. No day but today.

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on Sep. 27 2012 at 6:27 pm
Misfit95 PLATINUM, Dover, Ohio
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This is definitely something many people can relate to...Excellent work.

on Apr. 21 2012 at 4:34 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

I could relate to this and I like how you played with the words. Keep going!!!

on Dec. 16 2011 at 8:54 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

WOW!!! =)(=

on Dec. 14 2011 at 3:22 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I liked it---this what we would all do if we could re-do something that we did in the past.

on Nov. 2 2011 at 4:19 pm
Pamplemousse SILVER, Gilbert, Arizona
7 articles 1 photo 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be happy, Don't do whatever you like, Like whatever you do" -James Barrie (author of Peter Pan)

Regrets are just a part of life and I love how you were able to capture that in such an interesting way.

on Aug. 6 2011 at 7:45 pm
live-laugh-love SILVER, Meriden, Connecticut
8 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We don't need to rush. If somethings bound to happen, it will happen. In the right time, with the right person and for the best reason."

I can really relate to this. I really felt where you were coming from...I really liked it! :)

on Mar. 19 2011 at 8:44 pm
Paige101 BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It was the first time we ever played in Illinois, yet the 50-60 kids there were singing along to our tunes like they’d been fans all their lives." -A Day To Remember

This is one of my absolute favorite pieces on Teen Ink. :) It says alot in just a few words and it gets right to the point. Keep up the excellent work!

on Jan. 30 2011 at 12:48 am
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND, Parker, Colorado
57 articles 25 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't leap you'lll never know what it's like to fly"

I could totally relate to this poem and you told so much in such little! Simply powerful and amazing!!and if you get the chance could you check out some of my poetry such as A Mirror Image and The sinner confession (and comment and rate them????) it would be greatly appreciated! THANKS! And keep writing because your amazing at it! :)

on Jan. 17 2011 at 1:39 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."
~Voltaire

That was a great poem, I hope to see you writing more in the future.

on Oct. 27 2010 at 7:18 pm
This was a powerful poem dude. keeping writing .

on Aug. 18 2010 at 11:49 am
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

love how you leave sort of a hanger in the end. awesome.

on Jul. 10 2010 at 2:51 pm
CyndiDarling. BRONZE, Madera, California
1 article 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
'If Your Not Afraid To Die, You Aren't Afraid Of Anything' -Cyndi(:

Very Unique. It Really Makes Sense(:. Its Wonderful.

on Jun. 6 2010 at 9:45 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

wow. this is amazingg. u said so much in so few wordz. i luv it plz keep writingg

Caley SILVER said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 3:56 pm
Caley SILVER, Newton, New Jersey
5 articles 2 photos 6 comments
Simple & really beautiful!

Ridersblock said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 11:41 am
Ridersblock, Morehead, North Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Can miles truly separate you from friends... If you want to be with someone you love, aren't you already there?' -Richard Bach

This is pretty touching... I can relate pretty well to it. Good job!


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