Three More Haikus

February 11, 2010
Lilac Blossoms
Peer from your shelter.
Let the rain drip on petals
Of fragrant purple.


A wise, kind man dreams
Of honor and loyalty
To suffocate greed.

Kamikaze Storms

Saviors of Japan’s
Culture and independence
Destroy Mongol fleets.

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Pagerda said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 12:29 pm
Very interesting haikus you have created. Lovely format and imagery.
pfgoldfish13 replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 6:38 pm
Thank you! I wrote them for a history project.
Artst123 replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 6:34 pm

I like the first one the most, especially because of how you combine the sense of sight with the sense of smell. "fragrant purple"

Really awesome job!

pfgoldfish13 replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 7:00 pm
It's fun combining senses.
Artst123 replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 7:40 pm
I know, like saying blue noise.
pfgoldfish13 replied...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 7:50 pm
Yeah.  It's very very very fun.
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