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Come Back

January 28, 2010
By ShannyWrites BRONZE, Flower Mound, Texas
ShannyWrites BRONZE, Flower Mound, Texas
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I kept pushing you away
So why did it hurt
When you decided to leave?


It won't let me publish without having a certain number of characters, so disregard this little blip. It isn't part of the poem



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on Feb. 14 2010 at 9:51 am
TheBerkeleyBear BRONZE, Los Altos, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Never put off until tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow."

Can Haiku's be 7-5-7? I always thought it was only 5-7-5. Anyways, it's a decent poem. I think it couldve been polished a little more, though.