January 5, 2010
Brown leaf glides softly
In a silent waltz with wind
To the cold ground.

The proud, silent oak
Stands naked in frigid wind
Without his green coat

Rain. Tip-tap-tip-tap
Falling like widows tears to
Cleans the waiting earth

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Lunaractivity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 4:52 pm
I love haikus. Your structure is really good for somone who has never written a haiku before. I'm not sur I believe you... ;-)
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