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Dance With Me, Soft Wind

Would you like to dance
With me under the dark sky
Just the stars and us

We’ll be together
Forever as long as you
Don’t ever leave me

Cradle me gently,
Soft wind, and promise me that
You’ll never let go.





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kellyisgr8 said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 12:03 pm
i wish someone wrote this for me...:D
 
liddle_countrygirl said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 12:34 pm
this is also going in my favorites!
 
the_Horsegirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 2:33 pm
This is so sweet and musical-sounding. I really like it.
 
flamesword said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 10:54 am
nostalgic ^_^
 
puppy-dog-eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:08 pm
very pleasing to the ear. good job!
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:23 pm
:P :D
 
xXLilyXx said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 6:15 pm
These words just melt on my tongue. It feels so nostalgic...i just want to cry.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:22 pm
aw i get a little teary too when i think about hwo quickly time passes by
 
ChocolateCherryKiss said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 8:57 pm
i can imagine myself out in a dark, cool night, with nothing but the wind in hair and me just soaking it all in . Thank you
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:22 pm
you're very welcome!
 
candybar2008 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:45 pm
beautiful beautiful work.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:22 pm
thanks! :)
 
HorsesCANfly21 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:34 pm
amazing. i feel like a child again.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:21 pm
lol im glad because i was feeling like a child when i wrot ethis
 
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