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Hold Me Close To You

Hold me close to you
While you croon a lullaby
Of a thousand tales

With each soft sweet note
I gain the strength, the courage
To sing along as well.



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SapphireLamour said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 8:57 pm
I liked this! it sounds like it would make a good song.  
 
SapphireLamour said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 8:57 pm
i liked this one! it sounds as though it could be a song.
 
A Random Kid said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 7:15 am
bad its bad
 
YourWorstNightmare21 replied...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 7:23 am
Yo, kid what's ur prob bob? Gr8 poem
 
Wearing_Westwood replied...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 10:08 am

I like the idea behind your poem

but

The last line of the second verse has 6 syllables

to sing a-long as well

along is two syllables

other than that it was pretty good though

 
NicoleAnn00 said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 10:14 pm
Oh my gosh that was soooooooo amazing! i loved it!
 
BleedingRose said...
May 17, 2010 at 10:56 am

Looooooooooooooooooove it!  :D   5 star worthy definitely, great job, so powerful! Keep writing

-Rose

 
found_my_dream(: This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:12 pm
:D i love itttttttttttt
 
Katie T. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 4:18 pm
Stunning. Absolutley stunning.
 
candybar2008 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:49 pm
if my bf gave this to me i would hug him so hard...sigh.
 
HorsesCANfly21 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:37 pm
i love your haikus, they just roll off my tongue and the emotion is just perfect.
 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 8:09 pm
agree completely w/ horsez :P ur very talented!
 
kellyisgr8 replied...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 12:08 pm
haikus are definitely her thing!
 
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