Sleepless Slumber

I lie in sleepless
Slumber waiting for you to
Carry me away

To a better place
Where I can love and be loved
Without consequence





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NathanB said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 5:04 pm
Wow This is so good. We all want this. Please look at my stuff.
 
beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 4:37 pm
You have described something that we all want
 
BrokenBree said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 7:07 pm
Well written! I could practically hear the words. Very pretty(:
 
Melissa G. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 3:00 pm
I really like your poem, it was very moving to a lot people including me. I think you should keep going on writing more poems. So that way you can make your dream come true. 
 
sasssgirrrl22 said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 5:07 pm
i luv this. its so meaningful and the title fits it perfectly :)) plz comment/read some of my work if u dont mind. id really appreciate it!!
 
kellyisgr8 said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 12:08 pm
i think about this too...
 
liddle_countrygirl said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 12:37 pm
i love the title sleepless slumber
 
SuKuRa said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 10:59 am
thought provoking is an understatement!
 
puppy-dog-eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:06 pm
very good!
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:20 pm
thank you!
 
candybar2008 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:49 pm
i suffer from insomnia too. so glad im not the only one.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 6:39 pm
dude i have terrible insomnia. not fun at all. but at least we share that in common!
 
HorsesCANfly21 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:38 pm
i think about this poem at nite.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 6:38 pm
aw that's very flattering!
 
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