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Sleepless Slumber

I lie in sleepless
Slumber waiting for you to
Carry me away

To a better place
Where I can love and be loved
Without consequence



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NathanB said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 5:04 pm
Wow This is so good. We all want this. Please look at my stuff.
 
beautifulspiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 4:37 pm
You have described something that we all want
 
BrokenBree said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 7:07 pm
Well written! I could practically hear the words. Very pretty(:
 
Melissa G. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 3:00 pm
I really like your poem, it was very moving to a lot people including me. I think you should keep going on writing more poems. So that way you can make your dream come true. 
 
sasssgirrrl22 said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 5:07 pm
i luv this. its so meaningful and the title fits it perfectly :)) plz comment/read some of my work if u dont mind. id really appreciate it!!
 
kellyisgr8 said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 12:08 pm
i think about this too...
 
liddle_countrygirl said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 12:37 pm
i love the title sleepless slumber
 
SuKuRa said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 10:59 am
thought provoking is an understatement!
 
puppy-dog-eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:06 pm
very good!
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:20 pm
thank you!
 
candybar2008 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:49 pm
i suffer from insomnia too. so glad im not the only one.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 6:39 pm
dude i have terrible insomnia. not fun at all. but at least we share that in common!
 
HorsesCANfly21 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 6:38 pm
i think about this poem at nite.
 
9CatsPerLife101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 6:38 pm
aw that's very flattering!
 
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