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the sky cries in pain
as the lightning whips the clouds
tears fall from heaven


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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 5:58 pm:
Wow i love this!! its so interesting!!  if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! especially to anonymous!!!! thanx and ur really good!!!!
 
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almostactress77 said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 4:28 pm:
Wow. again dreamcatcher delivers = ) amazing.
 
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Imagination! said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 4:23 am:
wow- never thought of the rain that way before... this is fab, keep writing..
 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 8:14 pm:
wow very short yet so deep & powerful! i <3 it!! keep writing.
very creative
 
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