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Candy Heart

Little candy heart,

Lying deep down on green grass,

You have all my love.

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Aliescha L. said...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 11:11 am:
Very good, even though it was short it worked, you did an amazing job!!!!!
 
BleedingRose replied...
May 17, 2012 at 11:07 pm :

why thank you!!!!!   =]

-Roze

 
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dragonfly95 said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 9:39 am:
very deep and very sweet poem conveyed in three little lines...i like it alot, great job.
 
BleedingRose replied...
May 17, 2012 at 11:06 pm :

thx a bunch, i appreciate the feedback!

-Roze

 
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jrose said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 8:48 am:
this is so pretty the poem realy is and the person who wrote it was realy good to i love this poem
 
BleedingRose replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 9:38 am :

Thanks for the feedback, I'm really glad you like it!

-Rose

 

 
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Bush said...
Dec. 15, 2010 at 9:44 am:
Made me at first feel bad for the discarded candy heart who was (likely) tossed aside or dropped by two lovers, but then, I felt good for the heart, that someone appreciated it.
 
BleedingRose replied...
Jan. 5, 2011 at 9:06 pm :

Thanks!  I love how you give the candy heart so much character, lolz!  :)

-Rose

 
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scenequeenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 3:47 pm:
AMAZING!! so muuch deep feeling in 3 little lines
 
BleedingRose replied...
Jan. 5, 2011 at 9:06 pm :

Woot!  Thx so much for your comment  :D  I appreciate it greatly.

-Rose

 
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Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 6:19 pm:
love this!! lots of emotion in a short little poem. great job! 5 out of 5.
 
BleedingRose replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 10:16 pm :

Thanks so much, I'm really glad you like it a lot!  Thanks for all the comments!

-Rose

 
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 7:39 pm :

you're welcome! love the poems!

 

 
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Little Bud said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 8:30 pm:
Short but sweet...literally.
 
BleedingRose replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 8:49 am :

lolz thx!  that's what i meant for it i geuss

-Rose

 
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Beard Goth Lady said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 5:47 am:
this poem is beautiful how do people write things like this every time i try i fail miserably
 
BleedingRose replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 10:41 am :

Thanks for the comment!  And I'm sure you write fine, great even, you just need more self confidence!  Trust me, mine is dangerously low!  That's why I had a fake name when I first came on here.  It's good to start with haikus, just find a pic that inspires you and get typing!  You'll get better, trust me!  Just rememeber the 5/7/5 rule.  ;)

-Rose

 
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b_swain said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 8:10 pm:
This is soo cool did you write this as you saw the picture?
 
BleedingRose replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 4:47 pm :
Yes, 2/3 of the time I am inspired by pictures I see, mostly on teen ink! Thanks for the comment!
-Rose
 
b_swain replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 8:07 pm :
your welcome nice to know someone other than me does that.
 
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