Candy Heart

November 23, 2009
By BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)


Little candy heart,

Lying deep down on green grass,

You have all my love.

............................



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on May. 17 2012 at 11:07 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

why thank you!!!!!   =]

-Roze


on May. 17 2012 at 11:06 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

thx a bunch, i appreciate the feedback!

-Roze


on Apr. 21 2012 at 11:11 am
elizabethlong BRONZE, Chambersburg, Pennsylvania
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Very good, even though it was short it worked, you did an amazing job!!!!!

on Mar. 30 2012 at 9:39 am
dragonfly95 SILVER, Argaon, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
'' there is nothing to fear but fear its self''

very deep and very sweet poem conveyed in three little lines...i like it alot, great job.

on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:38 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thanks for the feedback, I'm really glad you like it!

-Rose

 


jrose said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 8:48 am
this is so pretty the poem realy is and the person who wrote it was realy good to i love this poem

on Jan. 5 2011 at 9:06 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Woot!  Thx so much for your comment  :D  I appreciate it greatly.

-Rose


on Jan. 5 2011 at 9:06 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thanks!  I love how you give the candy heart so much character, lolz!  :)

-Rose


Bush said...
on Dec. 15 2010 at 9:44 am
Made me at first feel bad for the discarded candy heart who was (likely) tossed aside or dropped by two lovers, but then, I felt good for the heart, that someone appreciated it.

on Oct. 19 2010 at 3:47 pm
vicious-fiction PLATINUM, Santee, California
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AMAZING!! so muuch deep feeling in 3 little lines

Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 7:39 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

you're welcome! love the poems!

 


on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:16 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thanks so much, I'm really glad you like it a lot!  Thanks for all the comments!

-Rose


Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 6:19 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

love this!! lots of emotion in a short little poem. great job! 5 out of 5.

on Apr. 11 2010 at 8:49 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

lolz thx!  that's what i meant for it i geuss

-Rose


Little Bud said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 8:30 pm
Short but sweet...literally.

on Apr. 8 2010 at 10:41 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Thanks for the comment!  And I'm sure you write fine, great even, you just need more self confidence!  Trust me, mine is dangerously low!  That's why I had a fake name when I first came on here.  It's good to start with haikus, just find a pic that inspires you and get typing!  You'll get better, trust me!  Just rememeber the 5/7/5 rule.  ;)

-Rose


on Mar. 24 2010 at 5:47 am
this poem is beautiful how do people write things like this every time i try i fail miserably

on Mar. 19 2010 at 10:39 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Sure! We all have to be inspired someowhere!

-Rose

on Mar. 18 2010 at 8:07 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

your welcome nice to know someone other than me does that.

on Mar. 18 2010 at 4:47 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Yes, 2/3 of the time I am inspired by pictures I see, mostly on teen ink! Thanks for the comment!

-Rose


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