my other half

November 15, 2009
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With you my heart rest
Our love is like no other
Baby, you are my world

When I’m with you
Everything is wonderful
You light up my path

You’re like my angel
You’re always protecting me
You are amazing

Baby I love you
You are my world and my life
You keep me going

Trust me when I say,
With everything that’s in me
Babe, you are my love

You’re my other half
Without you I’m a mess
My world is not right

You light up my life
You can always make me laugh
I’m smiling now

Thoughts of you always
Are in my mind, I love you
You are my everything

Babe, our love is true
Babe with everything I have
I’m in love with you

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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 5:59 pm
Awwi love it!!!!  if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! especially to anonymous!!!! thanx and ur really good!!!!
Rosebud32 said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 4:07 pm
i really like this one and i agree with M.A.C. but it is really good and i get what your saying. Great job!!
M.A.C. said...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 7:20 pm
sometimes the syllables don't line up (5,7,5), but good anyway
GazellarendraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 8:44 am
wow. sweet. almost like a fairy tale :)
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