November 14, 2009
Custom User Avatar
More by this author
I can feel his breath
cool against my long, bare neck
and I sense he's gone

hot tears on my cheeks
I turn, try to make a sound
but it's far too late

Join the Discussion

This article has 2 comments. Post your own now!

Born_to_fly said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 10:04 pm
It is kinda confusing but something makes it call out to me.
Well done.
Allyssaisahippie. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 12:31 pm
i know that, oh, so dreaded, hateful feeling.
Site Feedback