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I can feel his breath
cool against my long, bare neck
and I sense he's gone

hot tears on my cheeks
I turn, try to make a sound
but it's far too late



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Born_to_fly said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 10:04 pm:
It is kinda confusing but something makes it call out to me.
Well done.
 
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Allyssaisahippie. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 12:31 pm:
i know that, oh, so dreaded, hateful feeling.
 
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