Rainbow Wings

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
Gracefully dancing
Fluttering in the blue skies
Rainbows in its wings

In search of a leaf
To perch on ‘till morning light
The Butterfly sleeps





Join the Discussion

This article has 7 comments. Post your own now!

riedel said...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 10:23 am
I think this poem is short and sweet !! Wonderful !!
 
shabam34 replied...
Jan. 3, 2010 at 7:38 pm
Thanks sooo much!!!!!! Butterflys are sooo pretty!!!! :)
 
ilovetinkerbell said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 9:58 am
Great job. um, i think it needed a little more detail but other than that it was great.
Tink
 
shabam34 replied...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 5:51 pm
ya i thought it neede more detail top :) its really hard in a haiku but i will continue writing with improvement. thanx soo much 4 the comment ;)
 
ilovetinkerbell replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 12:52 pm
Okay they just posted some new ones that I wrote. I had promised to tell you when they came out. :)
Tinkerbell
 
shabam34 replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 6:05 pm
okay i will look at them right now :)
 
ilovetinkerbell replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 6:45 pm
okay. by the way yours are great.
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback