Does thinking about
if you think about me, count
as thinking of you?
if you think about me, count
as thinking of you?
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Train
Kestrel
Okay i just went back and reread it again because i was going to through all my favorites, and again i ask, you, Sir or Madam Anonymous: why is it called Train???
I think I had to read this four times before my brain truly appreciated it. I like it, though I don't understand the significance of calling it Train?
Jawsman21This is so good! I think it could flow a little better though.
very confusing but makes you think good job
This messes with my mind, very good!
FreedomIsMyVirtueThough it is kinda repetitive, I enjoyed this!!!
aww so short sweet and clever!!! I ponder this all the time
forgottenpenname
Alia_S._TanLots of meaning in this haiku! I luv it since i know how tht feels. Keep it up!
htrae22
justsmileanddanceyes it does! i love this! it got me confused at first but now i get it and i like it!
BrittieVeeshort and simple, but so much meaning :) i love it
KAT.CHsimple wordings but presents a beautiful picture in a mind
This is really spectacular! I didn't know such an idea could fit into 17 syllables.
HallowI love it. Perspective is everything. Way I see it? Yes.
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