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Train This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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Does thinking about
if you think about me, count
as thinking of you?

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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Godinspiresher43This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 27 at 1:41 pm:
I will forever love this poem. This is beautiful and amazing. I love this. This is one of the best haiku's i've ever read on here. :)
 
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LunarBirthThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 20, 2013 at 10:12 am:
I like it but what does the title symbolize??
 
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KestrelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 7, 2012 at 3:22 pm:
Okay i just went back and reread it again because i was going to through all my favorites, and again i ask, you, Sir or Madam Anonymous: why is it called Train??? 
 
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KestrelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 19, 2012 at 6:02 pm:
I think I had to read this four times before my brain truly appreciated it. I like it, though I don't understand the significance of calling it Train?
 
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Jawsman21 said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 2:41 pm:
great haiku, it really makes you think
 
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Bennytheman8 said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 2:37 pm:
This is so good! I think it could flow a little better though.
 
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bradysmith said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 2:35 pm:
very confusing but makes you think good job
 
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nickisreallycool said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 2:35 pm:
This messes with my mind, very good!
 
Bennytheman8 replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 2:39 pm :
maybe your just stupid. just kidding! I agree
 
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bmoney22 said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 2:33 pm:
confusing but makes you think I LIKE IT!!!!!
 
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FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Sept. 11, 2011 at 6:03 am:
Though it is kinda repetitive, I enjoyed this!!!
 
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silence-is-loud said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 10:32 pm:
aww so short sweet and clever!!! I ponder this all the time
 
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forgottenpennameThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 8:15 pm:
I love it! :)
 
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Rowan O. said...
Jan. 4, 2011 at 3:37 pm:
so so so good! :)
 
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Alia_S._Tan said...
Jan. 3, 2011 at 8:19 pm:
Lots of meaning in this haiku! I luv it since i know how tht feels. Keep it up!
 
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htrae22 said...
Jan. 3, 2011 at 7:56 pm:
nice short ans simple
 
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justsmileanddance said...
Jan. 1, 2011 at 2:17 pm:
yes it does! i love this! it got me confused at first but now i get it and i like it! 
 
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BrittieVee said...
Dec. 31, 2010 at 12:29 pm:
short and simple, but so much meaning :) i love it
 
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KAT.CH said...
Dec. 30, 2010 at 11:42 pm:
simple wordings but presents a beautiful picture in a mind
 
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Melissa H. said...
Dec. 30, 2010 at 7:47 pm:
This is really spectacular!  I didn't know such an idea could fit into 17 syllables.
 
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