Train MAG

October 30, 2009
By Anonymous

Does thinking about
if you think about me, count
as thinking of you?



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on Mar. 27 2014 at 1:41 pm
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Can't keep my eyes from the circling sky,
Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an earth-bound misfit, I"
~Pink Floyd

"Now is blessed
The rest
remembered "

~Jim Morrison

I will forever love this poem. This is beautiful and amazing. I love this. This is one of the best haiku's i've ever read on here. :)

on Oct. 20 2013 at 10:12 am
LunarBirth GOLD, Edinburg, Texas
16 articles 3 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"celebrate true nonconformity" - LunarBirth

I like it but what does the title symbolize??

on Jul. 7 2012 at 3:22 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
29 articles 11 photos 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

Okay i just went back and reread it again because i was going to through all my favorites, and again i ask, you, Sir or Madam Anonymous: why is it called Train??? 

on Jun. 19 2012 at 6:02 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
29 articles 11 photos 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

I think I had to read this four times before my brain truly appreciated it. I like it, though I don't understand the significance of calling it Train?

Jawsman21 said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:41 pm
Jawsman21, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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great haiku, it really makes you think

on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:39 pm
Bennytheman8 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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maybe your just stupid. just kidding! I agree

on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:37 pm
Bennytheman8 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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This is so good! I think it could flow a little better though.

bradysmith said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:35 pm
bradysmith, Waukesha WI, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
today ill do what others wont so tommorow i can do what others cant- jerry rice

very confusing but makes you think good job

on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:35 pm
nickisreallycool BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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This messes with my mind, very good!

on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:33 pm
bmoney22 BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
why dont you get away from me donkey!!!!!

confusing but makes you think I LIKE IT!!!!!

on Sep. 11 2011 at 6:03 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Though it is kinda repetitive, I enjoyed this!!!

on Jun. 30 2011 at 10:32 pm
silence-is-loud GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY, STING LIKE A BEE- MUHAMMID ALI

aww so short sweet and clever!!! I ponder this all the time

on Jan. 18 2011 at 8:15 pm
forgottenpenname GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Carpe diem."

I love it! :)

on Jan. 4 2011 at 3:37 pm
Rowan O&#39Shea BRONZE, Tadworth, Other
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so so so good! :)

on Jan. 3 2011 at 8:19 pm
Alia_S._Tan BRONZE, Elk Grove, California
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
I do not know who wrote this quote, by it's my favorite! "He handed her twelve roses, eleven real and one fake. *I love you till the last one dies*."-anonymous

Lots of meaning in this haiku! I luv it since i know how tht feels. Keep it up!

lollypops GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 7:56 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
16 articles 5 photos 219 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live

nice short ans simple

on Jan. 1 2011 at 2:17 pm
justsmileanddance PLATINUM, Montgomery, Alabama
28 articles 42 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
-Albus Dumbledore

yes it does! i love this! it got me confused at first but now i get it and i like it! 

on Dec. 31 2010 at 12:29 pm
BrittieVee SILVER, Torbay, Other
6 articles 4 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Wow I can't belive I won,
This is awesome,
Don't trip and fall,
I'm gonna get to thank the fans,
This is so cool,
Oh kany'e west is here,
Cool haircut,
What are ya doing there...
Ouch...
I guess I'm not gonna get to thank the fans"
— Taylor Swift <3

short and simple, but so much meaning :) i love it

KAT.CH GOLD said...
on Dec. 30 2010 at 11:42 pm
KAT.CH GOLD, Chennai, Other
12 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can respect others you should respect yourself too

simple wordings but presents a beautiful picture in a mind

on Dec. 30 2010 at 7:47 pm
mjhubbert BRONZE, Gold River, California
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be shivering with pneumonia than sitting on the dock and wondering if the water's warm.

This is really spectacular!  I didn't know such an idea could fit into 17 syllables.


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